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Wednesday, 18 October 2017

Te Manu Tukutuku

Te manu tukutuku poem

On monday we moved into our new school and today we had to make a poem about our new school with See, Hear, Smell and Touch.


I see all of the furniture and all of the colourful walls and the floors.

I hear all of the people excitement of how the new school looks like

I smell the fresh new air and all of the different tectures of socks on the carpet.

I touch the soft cosey walls they are like sheep fur.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tyson,

    You did an ok blog post.
    I liked how you described it.
    Maybe next time you could add why you posted it because people will wonder why you did it.
    Have you ever done poems like this before.
    This reminds me of writing a narrative story.

    Kind regards Ian.
    Canterbury
    Yaldhurst Model School.

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