Tyson's mud show dont tell

Success Criteria

8-10 sentences using wow words.

You do not mention the word mud until the last sentence.

The last sentence uses alliteration about mud.

As I put my hands into the tray, I saw the black liquidy gooey mixture. I saw black liquidy gooey mixture that looked like the dark sky.

When i put my hands in the tray, it felt like rocky squishy cold substance. The mixture was soft and cold also it looked like the rocky road before it was made. All I heard was “yuck” “eww” squishy black mixture.

Tyson's That Was Summer

I remember smelling Frozen yogurt that I could not eat

I remember tasting Wintery Ice tea that gave me brain freeze.

I remember seeing hot sun that gave me sunburn.

That was summer when it was really hot.

I remember summer When I allways go to the beach and sea water slowly goes down my throat.

I remember feeling my sun burn that was cooking my skin.

I remember hearing seagulls that fly in the hot sunny sky.

That was summer when people always go to to the pools, beaches and rivers.

Tyson's spencer park recount

OMG! The first school trip of the year Last Friday the year 4 to 6 children and the teachers from different classes went to Spencer Park for our school trip.

We went to Spencer Park because so the children and teaches get to know each other from different classrooms. Then when we got off the bus and we sat down under the tree for some shade because it was really hot then we had morning tea. When i had my morning tea i was sitting down with Nikora, Levi, Tamani, Tai and Nathan . After we had morning tea Our teaches said that we could play on the playground Nikora, levi, tamani, tai ,nathan and I went on the big spider web we went to the very top and it was a big view we could see the spencer park. After that me and tai went on the hand swings to get on the side it was really hard but at the end me and tai made it we went to the other side after that it was really fun. After that Nikora, Levi, Tamani, Tai, Nathan and I we played tag i was it also i got nathan and he couldn't get us for the whole game because he didn't catch up.

After that the teachers got us all together with our stuff. After that we was walking for a quiet long timeto the beach. When we got to the beach mr beach said that we had to get into groups. One of the challenges that mr breach said that we had to do was making the tallest, creative tower. We could only use the things that was on the beach driftwood,shells and stones. We had a quite long time to build the tower after that the teaches had to choose the tallest and the creative tower. After that we could knock our towers down it was fun i jumped onto my tower. Then we had to get into groups with as maney people as you want and then we could have a race on the soft yellow sand. For the race you had to run and touch the line where the cones was and we had to come back.  After that we walked back to spencer park and had lunch. After that we could play on the playground in went in the bush and there was traps. After we played on the playground we went back to school. It was a fantastic day because it was our first school trip and it was a nice sunny day to go to spencer park

Then we walked back to spencer park we sat under the tree for some shade because it was realy hot.

prefix=not

Today for phonix we learnt about prefix=not we had to make a word wheel and we had to write  Mis, Im, Un and Dis words.