Tyson's Paragraph rubric

Game Over gopher

This is a game that is very fun to play this is a link to the game i leant how to plant things to kill the monsters and then you need to save your carrotGame Over Gopher

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Tyson's persuasive writing

Im learning to write persuasive writing so i can persuasive someone and then i know how to persuasive someone

Scooters should not be allowed to ride in schools during interval and lunchtime.

In My Opinion scooters should not be allowed in schools.

Kids love to play on them but scooters have the potential to be very  dangerous. Scooters can get out of control and knock over small children who are not aware of what is going on around them.  Scooters can cause an injury because they are heavy and made out of medal.

Scooters? Scooters should be banned from all schools.

people get hurt and people that are riding them they can spin the scooter around people's head and they can get head injuries. When older children that are on the scooters could hurt adults and then you will get in big TROUBLE and they would tell the principal and then the principal would stop it happening because the parents will get angry and get in a argue. Scooters need a lot of space and can dominate the playground. If the children want to go fast or over jumps, they need room to get up speed.

If concreted areas are already used for organised games the children won't be able to play the games.

Scooters are dangerous in schools especially in crowded places. Often riders do not wear safety gear because they can't be bothered to put the safety gear on or it might take too long. Riders do tricks and jumps which can often end up injuring others.

I believe that no children should be allowed to scoot in school grounds during morning tea and lunch times.

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why do our muscles get tired

WOW my muscles are so tired I need to sleep?


Muscle fatigue is the decline in ability of a muscle to generate force. It can be a result of vigorous exercise but abnormal fatigue may be caused by barriers to or interference with the different stages of muscle contraction.
have a drink of water and then your muscles in you leg will get stronger And then you can do it every day.
Muscles need energy and oxygen to work. The energy comes from the food that you eat. We breathe in oxygen as part of the air, and our blood carrys it from our lungs to the rest of our body. Our muscles use the oxygen to realese energy.

When we exercise, our body sends extra oxygen to our mucles. Sometimes, when we exercise very hard, we need more oxygen than our body can get. This happens when our mucles are using oxygen faster than our blood can supply it. Thats when our muscles get tired.

this is my presentation that i made in the holidays i have learnt everything about this