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Scooters should not be allowed to ride in schools during interval and lunchtime.

In My Opinion scooters should not be allowed in schools.

Kids love to play on them but scooters have the potential to be very  dangerous. Scooters can get out of control and knock over small children who are not aware of what is going on around them.  Scooters can cause an injury because they are heavy and made out of medal.

Scooters? Scooters should be banned from all schools.

people get hurt and people that are riding them they can spin the scooter around people's head and they can get head injuries. When older children that are on the scooters could hurt adults and then you will get in big TROUBLE and they would tell the principal and then the principal would stop it happening because the parents will get angry and get in a argue. Scooters need a lot of space and can dominate the playground. If the children want to go fast or over jumps, they need room to get up speed.

If concreted areas are already used for organised games the children won't be able to play the games.

Scooters are dangerous in schools especially in crowded places. Often riders do not wear safety gear because they can't be bothered to put the safety gear on or it might take too long. Riders do tricks and jumps which can often end up injuring others.

I believe that no children should be allowed to scoot in school grounds during morning tea and lunch times.